hi amy this is me bea and i like you did on steps web you did great Amy and next time, you could do is need a rest okay and its cool! bye bye! from: bea
Kia ora Amy. I like how you have set a goal for Steps. I wonder what the rest of the Year 5s have done. I can't actually see your screenshot so next time, check that your post is published so people can see it all.
Kia ora Amy. I like how you have made a big, bold title. I ponder how much minutes you've gotten in 3 weeks. Next time you could make sure the screenshot is seen.
Kia ora amy I like you have gotten 72? mins in 3 weeks! But there is a promblem because there is no image of what you acturlly got so maybe next time focus on making sure that you actully have the image not glitched out and also good luck on getting your goal of 150 min in 3 weeks
Kia Ora Amy it is Lacie here great job on this. I like how your goal is in the hundreds. I wonder if you can over take your goal. Did you know that your steps web image is actually not visual.
Hola Amy, I like your blog post but it just needs a little bit more information. I wounder if it will get better thought out the year. Next time you should add the photo of your steps and put how many minutes you have done. Do you know why the photo didn't work? Is steps fun?
Kia ora Amy. First off I want to say good job on doing steps.I think you might have done more steps minutes then me, but one thing is that I can't see your image so could you please publish your post so people can see the full thing.How can you achieve your goal??
Kia ora Amy, I like how you how you have a good heading and capitil letters. I wounder how long this took you. Next time you should add the photo in. Do you like steps? Bye.
Hey Amy Acasia here. I like how you have made the colour of the font bright. I can not see the screenshot you have put on your blog So im wondering how much minutes you had gotten. Maybe next time you could cheek your blog and make sure that its good and there.
That is a cool goal your working on and i hope you complete your goal it is realy cool im not joking around it was cool but you couldent see the screenshot but everything els is good but whats your next goal it might be 200 if you reach that I'll be surprised o my god that was good 😊 #loved it
Hi Amy it is Cayleigh That is a cool goal your working on and i hope you complete your goal it is really cool im not joking around it was cool but you couldn't see the screenshot but everything else is good.
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hi amy this is me bea and i like you did on steps web you did great Amy and next time, you could do is need a rest okay and its cool!
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DeleteKia ora Amy.
ReplyDeleteI like how you have set a goal for Steps. I wonder what the rest of the Year 5s have done. I can't actually see your screenshot so next time, check that your post is published so people can see it all.
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DeleteKia ora Amy.
ReplyDeleteI like how you have made a big, bold title. I ponder how much minutes you've gotten in 3 weeks. Next time you could make sure the screenshot is seen.
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DeleteThe picture was there on my screen.
DeleteKia ora amy
ReplyDeleteI like you have gotten 72? mins in 3 weeks! But there is a promblem because there is no image of what you acturlly got so maybe next time focus on making sure that you actully have the image not glitched out and also good luck on getting your goal of 150 min in 3 weeks
It was there on my screen.
DeleteActually this is how you spell it: A C T U A L L Y.
DeleteKia Ora Amy it is Lacie here great job on this. I like how your goal is in the hundreds. I wonder if you can over take your goal. Did you know that your steps web image is actually not visual.
ReplyDeleteThanks!!And again the picture was there on my screen.
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ReplyDeleteHola Amy,
ReplyDeleteI like your blog post but it just needs a little bit more information. I wounder if it will get better thought out the year. Next time you should add the photo of your steps and put how many minutes you have done. Do you know why the photo didn't work? Is steps fun?
What does HOLA mean?
DeleteKia ora Amy.
ReplyDeleteFirst off I want to say good job on doing steps.I think you might have done more steps minutes then me, but one thing is that I can't see your image so could you please publish your post so people can see the full thing.How can you achieve your goal??
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Kia ora Amy,
ReplyDeleteI like how you how you have a good heading and capitil letters. I wounder how long this took you. Next time you should add the photo in. Do you like steps? Bye.
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ReplyDeleteBye Amy you do good 😎
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Deletekia ora Amy.
ReplyDeleteI like the goal that you have put.I wonder how many minutes you have done.Do you now how many minutes you have done all year.
Hey Amy Acasia here.
ReplyDeleteI like how you have made the colour of the font bright. I can not see the screenshot you have put on your blog So im wondering how much minutes you had gotten. Maybe next time you could cheek your blog and make sure that its good and there.
That is a cool goal your working on and i hope you complete your goal it is realy cool im not joking around it was cool but you couldent see the screenshot but everything els is good but whats your next goal it might be 200 if you reach that I'll be surprised o my god that was good 😊 #loved it
ReplyDeleteOpss im not kevin im dominick sorry amy if I confused you thanks a lot
DeleteHi amy it's levi i think next time you need to mabey put something so we can see your step web and good job for your work.
ReplyDeleteHi Amy it is Cayleigh
ReplyDeleteThat is a cool goal your working on and i hope you complete your goal it is really cool im not joking around it was cool but you couldn't see the screenshot but everything else is good.